This Tumblr is an ongoing project of the Kingsbridge Library's Teen Advisory Group, maintained by our intrepid young adult librarian. Our library is located in the Bronx, and is part of the New York Public Library system. We are fans of many things, including but not limited to The Hunger Games, Chloe Gong, Colleen Hoover, James Patterson, R.L. Stine, Holly Black, Roald Dahl, Laurie Halse Anderson, Neil Gaiman, Stephen King, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, The Vampire Diaries, Criminal Minds, Teen Wolf, Stranger Things, Bob's Burgers, graphic novels, Batman, Doctor Who, Marvel, DC, Harry Potter, Alice in Wonderland, Pokemon, manga, anime, fantasy and science fiction, horror, vampires, LGBTQ books, and having our voices heard!
Welcome (and Welcome Back) to the Kingsbridge Library Teens Tumblr!
Since we’ve been getting a bunch of new visitors recently, I thought I should give an overview of just what happens here.
Back in 2014, when this Tumblr was new and so was my “Reluctant Reader Wednesday” idea, Book Riot selected us as one of the 28 Must-Follow Tumblrs for Fans of YA, and we’ve been going onward and upward ever since!
A lot of the content on this Tumblr is reblogged stuff about books, authors, libraries, stuff that our TAG members think is cool, and stuff that *I* think is cool. Some of my posts take days or weeks to put together, while others are super-quick “hey look at THIS cool thing” posts. Well, it turns out that one of those super-quick posts became my most popular post EVER. Who knew that one little bookmark would inspire so much love?
I also document lots of stuff that goes on at our branch, including:
To celebrate the Summer Solstice this year, we held a special rare book viewing for our members. All of the books on display featured the people and monuments of Ancient Britain. We also displayed some mysterious stones which were discovered among with other larger examples when building work was done at the Inn in the 1980s!
(no ✨vibes✨, just structure, stakes, and first-sentence sweat)
hello writer friends 💌 so you opened a doc. you sat down. you cracked your knuckles. maybe you even made a playlist or moodboard. and then… you stared at the blinking cursor like it personally insulted your entire bloodline.
here’s your intervention. this post is for when you want to write chapter one, but all you have is aesthetic, maybe a plot bunny, maybe a world idea, maybe nothing at all. here’s how to actually start a book, from structure to sentence one.
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🌶️ STEP 1: THE SPICE BASE ~ “WHAT’S CHANGING?”
start with this question:
what changes in the protagonist’s life in the first 5–10 pages?
doesn’t have to be earth-shattering. they could get a letter, lose a job, run late, break a rule, wake up hungover in the wrong house. what matters is disruption. the opening of your book should mark a shift. if their day starts normal, it shouldn’t end that way.
🏁 opening chapters are about motion. forward movement. tension. momentum. if nothing is changing, your story isn’t starting, you’re just doing a prequel.
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⚙️ STEP 2: THE CRUNCHY BITS - CHOOSE AN ENTRY POINT
there are 3 classic places to start a novel. each one works if you’re intentional:
The Day Everything Changes most popular. you drop us in right before or during the inciting incident. clean, fast, efficient.
pro: immediate stakes con: harder to sneak in worldbuilding or character grounding
The Calm Before the Storm starts slightly earlier. show the character’s “normal” life, then break it. useful if the change won’t make sense without context.
pro: space to introduce your character’s routine/flaws con: risky if it drags or feels like setup
The Aftermath drop us in after the big event and fill in gaps as we go. works well for thrillers, mysteries, or emotionally heavy plots.
pro: instant drama con: requires precision to avoid confusion
📝 pick one. commit. don’t blend them or you’ll write three intros at once and cry.
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🧠 STEP 3: CHARACTER FIRST, ALWAYS
readers don’t care about your setting, your magic system, or your cool mafia politics unless they’re anchored in someone.
in the first scene, we need to know:
what this person wants
what’s bothering them (externally or internally)
one trait they lead with (bold, anxious, calculating, naive, etc.)
that’s it. just one want, one tension, one vibe. no bios. no monologues. no “they weren’t like other girls” essays. put them in a situation and show how they act.
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⛓️ STEP 4: OPEN WITH FRICTION
first scenes should create questions, not answer them.
there should be tension between:
what the character wants vs. what they’re getting
what’s happening vs. what they expected
what’s being said vs. what’s being felt
you don’t need a gunshot or a car crash (unless you want one). you need conflict. tension = momentum = readers keep reading.
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✏️ STEP 5: WRITE THE FIRST SENTENCE - THEN IGNORE IT
okay. now you write it.
no pressure. you’re not tattooing it on your soul. this isn’t the final line on the final page. you just need something.
tricks that work:
start in the middle of an action
start with a contradiction
start with something unexpected, funny, or sharp
start with a small lie or a weird detail
💬 examples:
“The body was exactly where she’d left it - rude.” “He was already two hours late to his own kidnapping.” “There was blood on the welcome mat. Again.” “They said don’t open the door. She opened it anyway.”
once you’ve got it? keep going. don’t revise yet. don’t edit. just build momentum.
you can come back and make it ✨iconic✨ later.
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📦 BONUS: WHAT NOT TO DO IN YOUR OPENING
don’t start with a dream
don’t info-dump lore in paragraph one
don’t give me three pages of your OC making toast
don’t try to sound like a Victorian cryptid unless it’s on purpose
don’t introduce 7 named characters in one scene
don’t start with a quote unless you are 800% sure it slaps
be weird. be sharp. be specific. aim for interest, not perfection.
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🏁 TL;DR (but make it ✨useful✨)
something in your MC’s life should change immediately
pick a structural entry point and stick to it
give us a person, not a setting
friction = good
first lines are disposable, just make them interesting
and if you needed a sign to just start the damn book, this is it.
💌 love, -rin t.
P.S. I made a free mini eBook about the 5 biggest mistakes writers make in the first 10 pages 👀 you can grab it here for FREE:
I think if quincey morris was written by an american author, we’d all be rolling our eyes, but the fact that he was written by an irish author makes him extremely entertaining like he’s this random cowboy just hanging out in europe and all the european characters are always talking about how cool and strong and manly he is. if an american wrote that it would be super dumb
Zelda Sayre and F. Scott Fitzgerald in 1919, the year before they married
“I love her and that’s the beginning and end of everything.”
~ F. Scott Fitzgerald in a letter explaining his deep feelings for his wife, Zelda
“Two souls are sometimes created together and in love before they’re born” ~ The Beautiful and Damned
Her biographer Nancy Milford wrote, “Scott had appealed to something in Zelda which no one before him had perceived: a romantic sense of self-importance which was kindred to his own.”
This Tumblr is an ongoing project of the Kingsbridge Library's Teen Advisory Group, maintained by our intrepid young adult librarian. Our library is located in the Bronx, and is part of the New York Public Library system. We are fans of many things, including but not limited to The Hunger Games, Chloe Gong, Colleen Hoover, James Patterson, R.L. Stine, Holly Black, Roald Dahl, Laurie Halse Anderson, Neil Gaiman, Stephen King, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, The Vampire Diaries, Criminal Minds, Teen Wolf, Stranger Things, Bob's Burgers, graphic novels, Batman, Doctor Who, Marvel, DC, Harry Potter, Alice in Wonderland, Pokemon, manga, anime, fantasy and science fiction, horror, vampires, LGBTQ books, and having our voices heard!
